Microsoft 마이크로소프트 awkward wordings

source: http://windows.microsoft.com/en-CA/windows-8/meet
target: http://windows.microsoft.com/ko-kr/windows-8/meet
microsoft korean awkward wording

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Get Windows 8 Pro on your current PC for an amazing price.
놀라운 가격으로 지금 여러분의 PC에 Windows 8 Pro를 설치하세요.
The noun ending 가격으로 (amazing price) doesn’t fit in context since it is taken as a means to install Windows 8 Pro 놀라운 가격으로 설치하세요). The structure modifier + object + verb makes the sentence awkward in this case. The beginning part, 놀라운 가격 (an amazing price) was supposed to modify the product name ‘Windows 8 Pro.’

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