delta.com 델타항공: semantically broken 01

source: http://delta.com/planning_reservations/deals_offers/low_fares/ target: http://ko.delta.com/planning_reservations/deals_offers/low_fares/ ‘Korean laguage’ reads an adjective 한국의 instead of the noun form 한국어. The translated term must have been generated from a Machine Translation. ‘please try your request again’ is translated as a physical request by means of other communication methods, which doesn’t fit in the context. The term ‘request’ is an …

Joint Commission International: semantically broken

source: http://ko.jointcommissioninternational.org/enko/people/ target: http://ko.jointcommissioninternational.org/enko/people/ The title ‘People’ is inconsistently translated and a dictionary term is used, which makes the tone awkward. ‘More people’ reads a grade-1 level of wording in context. The body sentences are semantically broken and the grammar won’t register at the appropriate level. The objects 환자중심인 해결책을(patient-centric solutions) and 환자 안전 실행을 …