Trelleborg 트렐레보그, proofreading required

EN: https://www.tss.trelleborg.com/en/products-and-solutions/hydraulic-seals
KO: https://www.tss.trelleborg.com/ko-kr/products-and-solutions/hydraulic-seals

Hydraulic applications are challenging for Seals.
유압 장비에서는 씰의 역활이 매우 중요합니다.
-> Spell check must be done before the target page is posted. The critical spell error shows the quality of the translation.

Not only must the hydraulic seals prevent leakage of fluid from the Cylinder, but hydraulic seals must also withstand high pressures, extreme temperatures and transverse forces within the cylinder.
씰은 실린더로부터의 유체의 누유를 막아줄 뿐만 아니라, 실린더 내부에서도 고압, 고온 그리고 횡력으로 부터 견뎌낼 수 있어야 합니다.
-> Inappropriate noun and verb in context don”t sound professional. The redundant meaning in “leakage of fluid” makes the flow awkward. One of the several space errors shows the quality of the translation.

In such applications, the function of Hydraulic Seals goes far beyond preventing fluid leakage.
그리고 이러한 기술은 유압씰의 기능이 단순히 유체를 막는 것만이 아닌 더 고차원적인 기술이 필요하다라는 것입니다.
-> Awkward noun and verb, “goes far beyond preventing fluid leakage

Use our CAD Service to download seal profiles direct to your CAD drawings
씰의 CAD 도면 서비스를 사용해 보세요.
-> The line shows a broken tag in target. The font size is not consistent with other bullet points. The verb doesn’t fit in context.

Hydraulic systems are sealed using a combination of specialized seals.
유압 시스템은 전문화된 씰과 결합되어씰링이 되어집니다..
-> Proofreading is required before the target page is posted. Two full stops are appeared. Also, there is another space error. The literal meaning of “specialized” also makes the flow awkward.

Wear rings guide the piston and piston rod within the hydraulic cylinder, absorbing transverse forces, preventing metal-to-metal contact.
Wear rings 은 메탈과 메탈의 접촉을 막아주며, 횡력을 흡수하고, 피스톤과 로드를 가이드 해주는 역활을 합니다.
-> Spell error, untransliterated terms, non-standard transliteration for “metal”, and inconsistent and awkward verb part.

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