http://shopMCM.com Broken Korean 정신이 녹아져 있는 (literally, immersed into/incorporated with wildlife mentality) Several space errors in description. How many are there in the highlighted area? (more than 6 in conservative way) Awkward/unreadable wordings 누적 금액별 해당하는 등급 shop MCM을 통하여 구매하신 내역만 (only for the purchase via shop MCM) vs On-Line Outlet 상품을 구매하신 내역은 …
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literally i am using the term literallly very often
awesome tech by hand. Beautiful!!!
Zynga Poker 징가 포커 inconsistent term
Facebook Zynga game app 페이스북 징가 게임 앱 Experience Experience is shortened to a game term XP but it reads the dictionary meaning in the description popup tool tip. 온라인인 친구가 없습니다 The noun ending 온라인인 reads a literal meaning and sounds ambiguous in context. It should be either 접속 중인 or 온라인 상태의.
ibm.com 아이비엠: semantically broken 01
source: http://www.ibm.com/analytics/us/en/?lnk=ft target: http://www.ibm.com/smarterplanet/kr/ko/business_analytics/ideas/?lnk=ft 비즈니스 분석을 활용하고 있는 조직은 경쟁사보다 뛰어난 성과를 보이고 있습니다. The sentence reads awkward tone due to the present continuous tense. The simple present tense delivers a compact and clean meaning and gives a better emphasis. Smarter Analytics는 IBM의 비즈니스 분석에 대한 IBM의 접근 방식입니다. The repeat pronoun IBM makes the …