source: http://support.apple.com/kb/HT5949?viewlocale=en_US target: http://support.apple.com/kb/HT5949?viewlocale=ko_KR To fit within the Home button, the Touch ID sensor is only 170 microns thin, not much thicker than a human hair. 홈 단추 크기에 맞춰 Touch ID 센서의 두께는 사람의 머리카락보다 그리 두껍지 않은 170미크론에 불과합니다. ->The sentence doesn’t make sense since the modifying phrase doesn’t flow within the main …
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Apple iCloud 애플 클라우드 awkward wordings
source: http://www.apple.com/iphone/icloud/ target: http://www.apple.com/kr/iphone/icloud/ Start here. Finish there. 여기에서 시작하고, 저기에서 끝내세요. This is a typical word-for-word delivery. You can create amazing documents and presentations on your … …로 멋진 문서와 프레젠테이션을 만들 수 있습니다. ‘presentations’ is a literal meaning and doesn’t fit in context since ‘프레젠테이션’ should come with 소개 (present/introduce) instead of 만들다 …
Apple iPhone 애플 아이폰 awkward wordings
source: http://www.apple.com/iphone/features/ target: http://www.apple.com/kr/iphone/features/ 놀랄 만큼 날씬해진 디자인에 디스플레이는 더 커지고 칩은 더 빨라졌습니다. The structure of the three phrases in the sentence are not consistent so the sentence reads awkward flow. The first one reads modifier+subject, the second subject+verb, the third subject+verb. As well, the shortened subjects in the second and third can be …
Apple 애플 awkward wordings
Apple Korean pageMeaningless redundant repeat in image text due to the literal delivery: target: iPhone 이래 가장 획기적인 iPhone (The most innovative iPhone since iPhone) Does “every inch” imply “모든 면에서 (in all aspects)? 오므리다 and 쓸어넘기다 need to be sanitized with better terms instead of meaningless awkward functional verbs in context.
Crema 크레마 iOS/Android broken grammar
Crema 크레마 iOS/Android app (ebook app) 때 (at the time of) doesn’t fit into the context since the time adverb is usually used in speech. It should be replaced with 도서 다운로드 및 스크랩 리스트 동기화 시 요금이 과다 청구될 수 있습니다. First off, the warning sentence is not appropriate in terms of meeting the …