source: http://support.apple.com/kb/HT5949?viewlocale=en_US target: http://support.apple.com/kb/HT5949?viewlocale=ko_KR To fit within the Home button, the Touch ID sensor is only 170 microns thin, not much thicker than a human hair. 홈 단추 크기에 맞춰 Touch ID 센서의 두께는 사람의 머리카락보다 그리 두껍지 않은 170미크론에 불과합니다. ->The sentence doesn’t make sense since the modifying phrase doesn’t flow within the main …
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apple.com 애플: semantically broken 03
source: https://www.apple.com/environment/ target: https://www.apple.com/kr/environment/ From reporting our entire carbon footprint to finding ways to reduce that footprint, Apple takes a comprehensive approach to environmental responsibility. Product by product, facility by facility, we report on our progress every year. So you can see what we’re doing — and what we’ve done — to make a difference. …
apple.com 애플: semantically broken 02
source: https://www.apple.com/imac/ target: https://www.apple.com/kr/imac/ OS X Mountain Lion makes every Mac intuitive and easy to use. It also makes it simple to find, organize, share, and do just about everything. And thanks to iCloud, it makes your Mac, iPhone , iPad, and iPod touch work wonderfully together. OS X Mountain Lion은 모든 Mac을 직관적이며 쉽게 …
Apple iCloud 애플 클라우드 awkward wordings
source: http://www.apple.com/iphone/icloud/ target: http://www.apple.com/kr/iphone/icloud/ Start here. Finish there. 여기에서 시작하고, 저기에서 끝내세요. This is a typical word-for-word delivery. You can create amazing documents and presentations on your … …로 멋진 문서와 프레젠테이션을 만들 수 있습니다. ‘presentations’ is a literal meaning and doesn’t fit in context since ‘프레젠테이션’ should come with 소개 (present/introduce) instead of 만들다 …
Apple iPhone 애플 아이폰 awkward wordings
source: http://www.apple.com/iphone/features/ target: http://www.apple.com/kr/iphone/features/ 놀랄 만큼 날씬해진 디자인에 디스플레이는 더 커지고 칩은 더 빨라졌습니다. The structure of the three phrases in the sentence are not consistent so the sentence reads awkward flow. The first one reads modifier+subject, the second subject+verb, the third subject+verb. As well, the shortened subjects in the second and third can be …