Microsoft Visual Studio, Awkward wordings in target

en-US: https://www.visualstudio.com/en-us/visual-studio-homepage-vs.aspx ko-KR: https://www.visualstudio.com/ko-kr/visual-studio-homepage-vs.aspx Source: Enterprise-grade solutions with advanced capabilities for teams working on projects of any size and complexity. Target: 크기 및 복잡성이 다양한 프로젝트로 작업하는 팀을 위한 고급 기능을 제공하는 엔터프라이즈급 솔루션입니다. -> “size and complexity” doesn’t fit in target context. The subject part “크기 및 복잡성이 다양한 프로젝트로 작업하는 팀” doesn’t flow …

Microsoft Azure: Literal wordings discolouring the original brightness

en-US: https://azure.microsoft.com/en-us/services/sql-database/ ko-KR: https://azure.microsoft.com/ko-kr/services/sql-database/ 계층 1급 성능을 쉽게 사용할 수 있게 해주는 관계형 DaaS(Database-as-a-Service) A relational database-as-a-service that makes tier-1 capabilities easily accessible -> ‘tier-1’ reads redundant meaning, which is not used in local market. ‘accessible’ is awkwardly rephrased which is a typical example of literal translation. 비즈니스급 응용 프로그램을 위해 클라우드 효율성을 활용하는 고객 …