en-US: http://www.cisco.com/c/en/us/solutions/midsize/overview.html ko-KR: http://www.cisco.com/web/KR/midsize/index.html ‘midsize business’ reads two different meanings in title and sub-level title. ‘중견기업용’ is not quite necessary in context since it just adds a new meaning. ‘businesses’ also reads two meanings in footer menu.
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CISCO security report, awkward nouns and verbs not reviewed
en-US: http://www.cisco.com/c/m/en_us/offers/sc04/2016-annual-security-report/index.html ko-KR: http://www.cisco.com/c/m/ko_kr/offers/sc04/2016-annual-security-report/index.html This is a typical example showing that the localized pages don’t meet the client’s business objectives. Unprofessional wordings always make the client’s target degraded. Source: Is Your Security Up to Date? Target: 귀사의 보안은 최신 상태입니까? -> Literal wording sounds awkward. Source: As cybercriminals increasingly profit from brazen attacks, your cyber-risk …
Cisco 시스코 awkward wordings/punctuation errors
target: http://www.cisco.com/web/KR/about/index.html 2012회계연도 수익: 460억 달러 전세계 직원수: 66,639명 (2012회계연도 4분기) -There are space errors and inconsistent use of brackets. 美 캘리포니아 주 산호세에 본사를 둔 시스코(NASDAQ: CSCO)는 1984년 스탠포드 대학교의 컴퓨터공학 연구원이었던 렌 보삭(Len Bosack)과 샌디 러너(Sandy …
Cisco How to buy 시스코 주문 awkward/broken syntax
source: http://www.cisco.com/web/ordering/root/index.html target: http://www.cisco.com/web/KR/ordering/index.html 시스코 제품에 대한 주문과 구입은 시스코 파트너 & 리셀러를 통해서 하실 수 있습니다. The verb is awkwardly separated from the subject part. The nouns 주문 (order) …
cisco 시스코 low grammar
Localised URL. target: http://www.cisco.com/web/KR/about/news/2012/9-12/news_1212.html low grammar in Cisco Korean Literal wordings 삶의 모든 영역 ‘연결’돼 있길 바라는 Y세대 The passive verb makes the tone literal and awkward. Reversed word order 이들은 무엇을 가장 먼저 할까? The object needs to be placed right before the verb to make natural. Awkward word selections: 침대에서 빠져 나오기도 전에 …