source: http://www.delta.com target: http://ko.delta.com The Easier-to-Redeem 2015 SkyMiles 사용이 더욱 쉬워지는 2015 스카이마일스 프로그램 ->The noun ‘use’ doesn’t agree to ‘program’ since the program itself is not a visible hand-carrying tool. It is also not consistent with the term in the body paragraph using an alternative spell. The beginning part also sounds awkward due to …
Tag: iOS Korean
apple.com 애플: semantically broken 05
source: http://support.apple.com/kb/HT5949?viewlocale=en_US target: http://support.apple.com/kb/HT5949?viewlocale=ko_KR To fit within the Home button, the Touch ID sensor is only 170 microns thin, not much thicker than a human hair. 홈 단추 크기에 맞춰 Touch ID 센서의 두께는 사람의 머리카락보다 그리 두껍지 않은 170미크론에 불과합니다. ->The sentence doesn’t make sense since the modifying phrase doesn’t flow within the main …
Halo 4 헤일로 4 awkward wordings & broken syntax
source: http://marketplace.xbox.com/en-us/Product/Halo-4/66acd000-77fe-1000-9115-d8024d530919 target: http://marketplace.xbox.com/ko-kr/Product/Halo-4/66acd000-77fe-1000-9115-d8024d530919 복수와 파멸에만 눈이 먼 고대 악마와의 전투로 마스터 치프가 돌아왔습니다. The adverbial phrase doesn’t connect to the subject due to the literal flow. 전투로 (to combat) should be adjusted to 전투를 위해. The emphatic noun ending 파멸에만 sounds awkward and is not necessary in context. 신비로운 세상에 난파한 마스터 치프는 새로운 …
Skype 스카이프 awkward wordings
I personally find that the localisation of the Skype is the worst output that I’ve ever seen. source: http://www.skype.com/intl/en/features/allfeatures/skype-to-skype-calls/ target: http://www.skype.com/intl/ko/features/allfeatures/skype-to-skype-calls/ Whether you’re calling your uncle on the other side of the world to tell him you’re getting married, or catching up with your best friend about her holiday. 지구 반대편에 있는 삼촌에게 전화를 걸어 …
The Great Typo Hunt, “Caution:”
Is it still traditional? source: The Great Typo Hunt