Google Groups: awkward nouns 09

source: https://groups.google.com/forum/?hl=en#!overview target: https://groups.google.com/forum/?hl=ko#!overview Groups 그룹스 ->An alien term. Keyboard shortcuts and a streamlined design mean you won’t spend time waiting to read and get involved. 키보드 단축키와 간편한 디자인으로 원하는 동작을 바로 실행할 수 있습니다. ->’동작(action)’ doesn’t fit in context.  

delta.com 델타항공: awkward wordings 33

source: http://www.delta.com target:  http://ko.delta.com The Easier-to-Redeem 2015 SkyMiles 사용이 더욱 쉬워지는 2015 스카이마일스 프로그램 ->The noun ‘use’ doesn’t agree to ‘program’ since the program itself is not a visible hand-carrying tool. It is also not consistent with the term in the body paragraph using an alternative spell. The beginning part also sounds awkward due to …

delta.com 델타항공: inconsistency 32

source: http://www.delta.com/content/www/en_US/shop/deals-and-offers/asia-pacific/seoul-be-flights.html?icid=AsiaFS-KR-BE-TP source: http://www.delta.com/content/www/en_US/shop/deals-and-offers/asia-pacific/seoul-flights.html?icid=AsiaFS-KR-EC-TP target: http://ko.delta.com/content/www/en_US/shop/deals-and-offers/asia-pacific/seoul-be-flights.html?icid=AsiaFS-KR-BE-TP target: http://ko.delta.com/content/www/en_US/shop/deals-and-offers/asia-pacific/seoul-flights.html?icid=AsiaFS-KR-EC-TP From KRW3,000,000 ->The currency unit ‘KRW’ and the preposition ‘from’ are not consistent. The phrases are confusing since the same term reads a noun form as well as a directional adverb form, respectively. It is a common error when proofreading is not done properly.