Microsoft Azure, cloud computing not delivered

en-US: https://azure.microsoft.com/en-us/overview/what-is-azure/ ko-KR: https://azure.microsoft.com/ko-kr/overview/what-is-azure/ Your app. Your framework. Your platform. All welcome. 앱 프레임워크 플랫폼 반갑습니다. -> “app, framework, platform” is taken as a single term in target. The string doesn’t make sense at all due to the improper punctuations and awkward rephrase of “All welcome.” Microsoft Azure is a growing collection of integrated cloud …

Microsoft SQL Data Warehouse, awkward sentence structure in target

en-US: https://azure.microsoft.com/en-us/services/sql-data-warehouse/ ko-KR: https://azure.microsoft.com/ko-kr/services/sql-data-warehouse/ Source: Historically, data warehouses have required fixed combinations of storage and compute, often underutilizing expensive resources. With Azure SQL Data Warehouse, storage and compute scale independently. Target: 일반적으로 데이터 웨어하우스는 저장소와 계산의 고정된 조합이 필요하여 종종 값비싼 리소스를 충분히 활용하지 못하곤 했습니다. -> Verb part doesn’t agree to subject part due …

Microsoft Hybrid Cloud, inconsistent IT terms and literal translation

en-US: https://www.microsoft.com/en-us/server-cloud/solutions/hybrid-cloud.aspx ko-KR: https://www.microsoft.com/ko-kr/server-cloud/solutions/hybrid-cloud.aspx Literal translation doesn’t deliver the meaning. Source: Why choose between your datacenter and the cloud? A hybrid cloud solution gives you both. Target; 왜 데이터센터와 클라우드 중에서 선택해야 합니까? hybrid cloud 솔루션이 두 가지 기능을 모두 제공합니다. -> “why” sentence reads literal wording, which makes the tone awkward. It was supposed …

Microsoft Visual Studio, Awkward wordings in target

en-US: https://www.visualstudio.com/en-us/visual-studio-homepage-vs.aspx ko-KR: https://www.visualstudio.com/ko-kr/visual-studio-homepage-vs.aspx Source: Enterprise-grade solutions with advanced capabilities for teams working on projects of any size and complexity. Target: 크기 및 복잡성이 다양한 프로젝트로 작업하는 팀을 위한 고급 기능을 제공하는 엔터프라이즈급 솔루션입니다. -> “size and complexity” doesn’t fit in target context. The subject part “크기 및 복잡성이 다양한 프로젝트로 작업하는 팀” doesn’t flow …