en-US: https://azure.microsoft.com/en-us/services/sql-data-warehouse/ ko-KR: https://azure.microsoft.com/ko-kr/services/sql-data-warehouse/ Source: Historically, data warehouses have required fixed combinations of storage and compute, often underutilizing expensive resources. With Azure SQL Data Warehouse, storage and compute scale independently. Target: 일반적으로 데이터 웨어하우스는 저장소와 계산의 고정된 조합이 필요하여 종종 값비싼 리소스를 충분히 활용하지 못하곤 했습니다. -> Verb part doesn’t agree to subject part due …
Tag: Korean translation
Microsoft Server Cloud, Alien terms not reviewed
en-US: https://www.microsoft.com/en-us/server-cloud/ ko-KR: https://www.microsoft.com/ko-kr/server-cloud/ Navigation menus are not properly reviewed. Several lines show machine translation (e.g. “Azure” reads “blue”, “Other” in an adjective form. “Agile” is transliterated while the term remains in source in other pages).
Microsoft Hybrid Cloud, inconsistent IT terms and literal translation
en-US: https://www.microsoft.com/en-us/server-cloud/solutions/hybrid-cloud.aspx ko-KR: https://www.microsoft.com/ko-kr/server-cloud/solutions/hybrid-cloud.aspx Literal translation doesn’t deliver the meaning. Source: Why choose between your datacenter and the cloud? A hybrid cloud solution gives you both. Target; 왜 데이터센터와 클라우드 중에서 선택해야 합니까? hybrid cloud 솔루션이 두 가지 기능을 모두 제공합니다. -> “why” sentence reads literal wording, which makes the tone awkward. It was supposed …
Microsoft Visual Studio, Awkward wordings in target
en-US: https://www.visualstudio.com/en-us/visual-studio-homepage-vs.aspx ko-KR: https://www.visualstudio.com/ko-kr/visual-studio-homepage-vs.aspx Source: Enterprise-grade solutions with advanced capabilities for teams working on projects of any size and complexity. Target: 크기 및 복잡성이 다양한 프로젝트로 작업하는 팀을 위한 고급 기능을 제공하는 엔터프라이즈급 솔루션입니다. -> “size and complexity” doesn’t fit in target context. The subject part “크기 및 복잡성이 다양한 프로젝트로 작업하는 팀” doesn’t flow …
Microsoft Azure, Broken grammar and mistranslation in target
en-US: https://azure.microsoft.com/en-us/documentation/articles/virtual-machines-linux-tutorial/ ko-KR: https://azure.microsoft.com/ko-kr/documentation/articles/virtual-machines-linux-tutorial/ Source: Azure has two different deployment models for creating and working with resources: Resource Manager and classic. This article covers using the Resource Manager deployment model, which Microsoft recommends for most new deployments instead of the classic deployment model. Target: Azure에는 리소스를 만들고 작업하기 위한 두 가지 다양한 배포 모델이 있습니다. …