source: http://ko.jointcommissioninternational.org/enko/people/ target: http://ko.jointcommissioninternational.org/enko/people/ The title ‘People’ is inconsistently translated and a dictionary term is used, which makes the tone awkward. ‘More people’ reads a grade-1 level of wording in context. The body sentences are semantically broken and the grammar won’t register at the appropriate level. The objects 환자중심인 해결책을(patient-centric solutions) and 환자 안전 실행을 …