Vera Wang 베라왕 alien term

source: http://www.verawang.com/EN/Korea/fashion/collections/pre-fall-2013 target: http://www.verawang.com/KO/Korea/fashion/collections/pre-fall-2013 간절기 (Pre-fall) is a mixed compound noun which originated from the japanese term, 節氣の間 so the term is not accepted as a standard.

Halo 4 헤일로 4 awkward wordings & broken syntax

source: http://marketplace.xbox.com/en-us/Product/Halo-4/66acd000-77fe-1000-9115-d8024d530919 target: http://marketplace.xbox.com/ko-kr/Product/Halo-4/66acd000-77fe-1000-9115-d8024d530919 복수와 파멸에만 눈이 먼 고대 악마와의 전투로 마스터 치프가 돌아왔습니다. The adverbial phrase doesn’t connect to the subject due to the literal flow. 전투로 (to combat) should be adjusted to 전투를 위해. The emphatic noun ending 파멸에만 sounds awkward and is not necessary in context. 신비로운 세상에 난파한 마스터 치프는 새로운 …