Asiana Airlines 아시아나항공 awkward/broken syntax

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Commas with Quotations

6.50 COMMAS WITH QUOTATIONS Material quoted in the form of dialogue or from text is traditionally introduced with a comma (but see 6.63, 13.17). If a quotation is introduced by that, whether, or a similar conjunction, no comma is needed. It was Thoreau who wrote, “One generation abandons the enterprises of another like stranded vessels.” …

VMware VM웨어 awkward wordings

target: http://www.vmware.com/kr/virtualization/why-choose-vmware.html                                                       오늘날의 비즈니스 요구 사항을 충족시키고 비즈니스 흐름에 발맞춰 성장할 수 있는 최고의 가상화 인프라 솔루션을 선택하여 귀사의 경쟁적 우위를 유지하십시오. A proper punctuation is needed to …